wars-of-the-roses.com Typos, comments, etc...

I'll quote Hobilar to begin this page:

'I seem to have somehow missed reading this thread until now, and I should like to congratulate Kingmaker on undertaking such a large and complex subject. Sadly the site does appear to include quite a few obvious Typos which rather mars the work that Kingmaker has clearly put into its construction. I was wondering if Kingmaker might care to open a page in our own Wiki in which any observations and/or corrections might be reported. He could then choose whether or not to make the necessary changes to his Web Site. I for one, always appreciate any feedback on subjects that I have written, and I trust our good friend Kingmaker will not object to any constructive comments.'

Thank you all for anything you may submit here.

Origins of the Conflict

Paragraph 1 Line 1-Delete Blood Insert Brood ( Actually I think that the first sentence needs a complete re-write. It sounds like the king is creating dukedoms AFTER he was dead. Pretty clever don't you think?)

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Paragraph 4 Line 1-Insert Comma after marriage

Paragraph 4 Line 2 Delete allegiance Insert alliance

The Battle of St Albans

Paragraph 1 Line1 : After Yorkist's Insert leaders

Delete traveled Insert travelled

Line 2 After received insert 'a'

The Battle of Blore heath

Paragraph 1 line 3 Delete 'Ally' Insert 'friendly'

Paragrapn 2 Line 1 &2 Delete 'in London' Insert ' at Westminster'

Paragraph 3 line 5 Amend 'had his men dig trenches and fix stakes around their positions' and replace with 'men protected by prepared trenches and fixed stakes'

After 1 O'clock insert 'in the afternoon'

Paragraph 5 Line 2 Delete 'rout' and insert 'pursuit'

Article added: 2006-03-18 @ 4:49 am | Last Modified: 2006-12-18 @ 9:47 pm

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